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ZF SSA Goten
08-24-2001, 01:49 AM
One day, Vegeta and Goku were taking a little stroll in the woods with Goten and Trunks. Goten and Trunks were running in and out from behing tree's a fighting eachother. While Goku and Vegeta were discussing the difficulties of father-hood. All of a sudden, Goten runs into someone and knocks him down. "Who, you ok?" Goten asked the stranger.

"Of Course not you *****ing idiot! You just plowed into me! Grrrr...." said the stranger.

"Wow wow wow....calm down. It's not like I took off your head or anything. Here, give me your hand." Goten says and extends his hand.

"Thanx. You wouldn't happen to train Pokémon would u?" He asked.

"What's a Poimon?" Goten asked.

"no, a Pokémon. They are creautres that u battle with one another." he said.

"Really? I wanna fight one! How many u got?" Goten said jumping up and down. Trunks came running over.

"Who's the runt Goten?" Trunks asked.

"I'm not a runt! My name is Ash! Ash Ketchem.!" Ash yelled.

"More like As$ Ketchup." Trunks said snickering.

"Ok, now u gonna get it. PIKACHU! I CHOOSE YOU!" Ash yells. And before he could even throw the pokeball, there is the 'Go Go Go' voice in the background. All of a sudded Goten, Trunks, and Ash all look at this cilender flying over head. IT explodes blinding them all.

"What the-" Is all Trunks had time to say. The Counter-Terrorist/Cartoon team moved in and shoot them all with Styer Augs. They were gone as quickly as they had arrived.

A little while later, Goku and Vegeta arived at the scene.

"AGG!!! You May take our kids lives, but you will never take OUR FREEEEEDOM!!!!!! :eek: " GOku screamed.

to be continued.....


if u want to see more, post positive comments.

Warlock
08-24-2001, 04:24 AM
It seems you've made a story mixing DBZ/Pokemon/ Counter-Strike. How...interesting...

ZF SSA Goten
08-25-2001, 10:07 PM
don't forget the FREEEDOM! part at the end. that's from Braveheart. :smirk:

*GaLxY-GiRl*
08-25-2001, 10:56 PM
Me Like! But, Hold Up!!!....Why didn't Goten or Trunks scortch Ash and Pickachu's a$$es?.....(the fact that lil part wasn't included slightly disapointed me....) :( :devil: heh heh, BTW...Goku doesn't get his head chopped off after he declares his freedom does he? :eek:

Gachi
08-25-2001, 11:51 PM
Post some more. I like it. :D

CottemonRuki
08-26-2001, 12:00 AM
ARE YOU INSANE!?!? I love it! I wanna read more!!! MORE I TELL YOU MORE!!! AND Don't let Trunks die!

Chauien
08-26-2001, 03:07 AM
sounds real good

should hav sumthing with team rocket getting there ***** kicked

more!!

CottemonRuki
08-26-2001, 09:01 PM
I want more :D

Gachi
08-26-2001, 09:05 PM
Hey, didn't you used to have some other dbz story? What ever happened to that? :confused:

ZF SSA Goten
08-26-2001, 10:11 PM
i finished it.....about a month ago

Warlock
08-26-2001, 10:22 PM
Well, it looks like the public is demanding more, so give them more. We're all waiting for the next installment...

CottemonRuki
08-27-2001, 08:51 PM
yup yup. I agree Worlock person :D sorry... I'm just a lil hyper...

Gachi
08-27-2001, 09:00 PM
Originally posted by ZF SSA Goten
i finished it.....about a month ago


Can you post it? Pleeease? :angel: :D

White Digivise
08-28-2001, 01:06 AM
I voted that you were insane. *Smiles* :laugh:

Warlock
08-28-2001, 06:09 AM
Well, aren't you going to post the next part?

CottemonRuki
08-28-2001, 06:17 PM
yup yup. This is funny... this is more then funny... post more!