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Kari
08-29-2001, 03:53 PM
This is Chpter 1 of my fanfiction, introducing a new digidestined called Ashley. Each week or so I shall add a new chapter on to the end of this. Don't forget 2 reply and tell me what u think, in case I need to make a few changes! :babble:

Chapter 1

When Cody got to the classroom, everyone else seemed to
already be there. As usual, his classmates were chatting loudly
and he had to avoid a large pink rubber flying past his ear
before he could reach his seat.
Cody sat down, got out his books and set them on the table
before joining in with the chaos. There was a strange kid a the
front of the class, talking to the teacher. Nobody seemed to be
taking much notice.
Mr. McDougall rapped his desk with a ruler for silence.
“Class settle down. I’d like you all to meet Ashley. She’s just
moved here. Ashley, you can sit-”
The telephone on the desk rang loudly, interrupting his
sentence. Mr. McDougall picked up the phone. “Hello, room 27, Mr
McDougall speaking...Oh, hi mom...not right now, mom, I’m in
class...Oh, do I have to...I ate all my greens yesterday, I ate
every scrap on my plate!!!...I don’t need you to wash my
underwear, I can do it all by myself!...*sigh* fine, if that’s
what makes you happy...I’ll be right over...”
Mr. McDougall put the phone down. “I need to go, there’s,
er, an emergency, uh, down at the underwear-I mean, headteacher’s
office, I’ll go find someone to cover for me...Ashley, you can
sit where you like. Now stay quiet, everyone.”
There was silence as he made towards the door, but the
minute the door shut and his footsteps had faded down the hall,
the chaos began again. Ashley looked around for a spare seat.
The boys were throwing paper pellets and pen lids at each other.
None of the girls seemed all that interested. After all, they
all had their own friends by now.
Ashley was slightly smaller than Cody, only about an inch.
She had long, straight black hair. Two small strands were
braided in blue and pink and fell over either shoulder. Her
large, dark blue eyes were similarly shaped to Cody’s. Cody
thought she looked nice, so he caught her eye and pointed to an
empty seat next to him. Ashley smiled gratefully and went
crossed the classroom to where Cody was sitting.
“Hey, Ashley, over here!” A horribly familiar voice called
through the noise of the classromm. Cody fumed and only the fact
that he wouldn’t waste the energy stopped him from hurling an
encyclopedia in Adam’s freckly face.
Ashley gave Adam a funny look. “I think I can decide where I
want to sit without your help, thank you.” and with that she
turned away from Adam and sat next to Cody.
“Well handled.” Cody said approvingly. “Remind me not to get
on your bad side.”
“Thanks” Ashley glared across the room at Adam. “What a
jerk.” she said. “Does he always behave like that?”
“Pretty much.”
At recess, a lot of kids ragged Cody and Ashley a lot.
Stupid taunts and giggles flew around them.
“Cody and Ashley, sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G!”
“How childish!” Ashley said, disgusted.
Cody and Asley became fast friends and after a few weeks,
knew each other very well.
After a while, the taunts died down. Cody told the Davis
and TK about Ashley.
“So?” Davis shrugged. “What about her?”
“Nothing, just making conversation.” Cody muttered. As soon
as he said it, he knew it sounded pathetic.
“Oh, I get it!” Davis narrowed his eyes and grinned. “You
like this kid, right?”
Cody went red and stared down at his sneakers as if they
were the most fascinating thing in the universe. “Kinda.”
“Well, let me help you there, Cody!” said Davis, crouching
down so he could see Cody properly. “You want this girl to like
you back, so first you have to - Ow!”
TK had taken advantage of Davis’ positing and prodded him,
so Davis fell over.
“I wouldn’t take advice from him, Cody.” TK said. “He can’t
even get Kari to like him, never mind help someone else get a
girlfriend!”
Davis got up off the floor, muttering under his breath.
“You just have to be natural, that’s all there is to it. By
the sound of things, I’d say she likes you, too. Just hope that
one of you can pluck up the courage to say so.”
Cody nodded. “Thanks, TK.”


Well, there's chapter 1. Now I'm off 2 get dinner. :tasty: This is Chpter 1 of my fanfiction, introducing a new digidestined called Ashley. Each week or so I shall add a new chapter on to the end of this. Don't forget 2 reply and tell me what u think, in case I need to make a few changes! :babble: This is Chpter 1 of my fanfiction, introducing a new digidestined called Ashley. Each week or so I shall add a new chapter on to the end of this. Don't forget 2 reply and tell me what u think, in case I need to make a few changes! :babble: Chapter 1 Well, there's chapter 1. Now I'm off 2 get dinner. :tasty:

CottemonRuki
08-29-2001, 05:11 PM
*clap clap* :D Yah! Me like, me like! Keep going ;)

Sara
08-29-2001, 07:16 PM
Excellent character work! I like it!

*quietly waits for more*

AmericanWriter
08-29-2001, 11:12 PM
THAT STORY WAS AWSOME! I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT MORE ABOUT ASHLEY! SHE SEEMS COOL! DO SHE AND CODY END UP TOGETHER? **I AM VERY IMPATIENT, THAT IS WHY ONE OF MY CRESTS IS PATIENCE** WHO IS HER DIGIMON? IS IT STRONG?




I DIDNT KNOW THAT I COULD POST STORIES IN HERE! I THINK I MIGHT START A NEW LINE OF FAN FICS ONLY FOR OTAKU! :wigout: :D :angel:

pedro
08-29-2001, 11:17 PM
that was tight

when are you goin to make the next chapter???????

Kari
08-30-2001, 03:41 PM
Hey, thanx 4 the enthusiasm, everyone! I'll be posting a new chapter up every week. Stay tuned!

KariKamiya
08-30-2001, 07:02 PM
That was cool. Ashley reminds me of someone, I just don't remember who!!!

Alexander
08-30-2001, 07:09 PM
Excellent! It's wonderful to see people writing fan-fictions again!
I wish you luck on all of your writings!

White Digivise
09-01-2001, 01:09 AM
I love it so far. You're great at this whole writing thing. I love it when ppl can add detail like you did. Congrats! *Smiles* :)

Kari
09-01-2001, 07:04 AM
Wow! This is great! :D I can't believe everyone loves this so much! Maybe I'll write another one after this. In reply to all your messages, Ashley's Digimon will make her first appearance in Chapter five. I hope you are all encouraged to read on, because I'm posting chapter two up on Wednesday, the 5th of September. Once again, thanks you everyone for all your enthusiasm!:babble:

Kari
09-01-2001, 07:18 AM
Wow! This is great! :D I can't believe everyone loves this so much! Maybe I'll write another one after this. In reply to all your messages, Ashley's Digimon will make her first appearance in Chapter five. I hope you are all encouraged to read on, because I'm posting chapter two up on Wednesday, the 5th of September. Once again, thanks you everyone for all your enthusiasm!:babble:

Kari
09-01-2001, 07:29 AM
Oops! Posted it twice! :blush: By the way, I might have to post the next chapters on Fridays, cos of school. I want to be a good little school girl, now, don't I?:angel: :D *Pretends to be sick* :devil:

Kari
09-01-2001, 07:37 AM
I'VE GOT AN IDEA!!!!!

I WANT YOU GUYS TO MAKE UP AND DRAW A NEW DIGIDESTINED AND HIS/HER DIGIMON! I WANT YOU TO PM THE DETAILS TO ME AND I'LL TRY AND PUT SOMETHING TOGETHER ON THEM! I'M GOING TO DO ONE, AND I'M ACCEPTING UP TO SEVEN MORE, I'LL BE CHOOSING THE MOST ORIGINAL IDEAS. I'll start it after this fanfic is done. *gets out her sketchpad and her notebook.* Well, better get crackin'.

Once I have chosen I will be announcing the other seven digidestined, along with their details, digimon and creators.

The closing date has not yet been decided yet, but I'll let you know asap.

ps if you don't have a scanner, then you can just describe you digidestined.

Thank you for your time.

Dragonballzman
09-01-2001, 08:55 AM
Hey, that was awesome! You say ur letting ppl make Digidestined? Kool! I'm gonna make one! :D

Kari
09-01-2001, 04:09 PM
I just recieved one entry, within just a few hours! Brilliant response!