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Thanks, you're one of the best writers I know too. Just keep reading.

The shadows are lurking
around the corner
The spirits are whispering
in my ear
The ghosts of my ancestors
keep me on the path
The love from myself
goes out to all
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As long as they're not feastig on me, it's fine. Besides, yours don't don't sound like that.

I want to be free
Free from this cruel world
To roam on my own
And not to be told
Anything for my sake
I can take care of myself
Without anyone telling me
You have to leave me alone
I'm sick and tired of you
Telling me about my life
I was there I should know
I can make my own decisions
So let's keep it that way
Because I don't need you.
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Alright.


I walk alone for these times
Staying out of sight
From all of those who slay
Slaying down the innocent people
The ones who stood by them
They don't belive in friends
Just power greed and money
Those who want to stop them
One day will
And I know
It'll be one day soon


This goes out to Sadaam Housan.
(Is that how you spell his name?)
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Well, Ruby, if he does read it I just hope he can't find out where I live.:worried:
Alexa, thanks and they are pretty similar. I just basically stick to one type of poetry.
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I don't believe a word you say
You always lie to me
Only to me
It's not a excuse to hide the truth
It's just your arrogant mind
The one that thinks it knows it all
Figure it out yourself
I'm not telling you
If you can make me
You can make yourself
Go ahead of me
I don't mind
You knew you were always wrong
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I might post a few more today and that's it. I'm starting to run low. This one is a little different than the others.

Scents of a candle
Carry throughout the room
Filling in every inch of space
FLowing through the air
Like wind beneath an eagle's wings
Soaring high above the clouds
Going over your body
To overwhelm your senses
Whispering in your ear the daring words
Come with me
It draws you from the corner
Taking you far away from home
Only returning when you cry
Crying for the scents of a candle
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I told your poem didn't sound like vampires. Thanks for liking my poem. This is the last one for today.

Someone help me
Save me from this
This lonliness and darkness
A world of no return
Where everyone passes by
Not seeing what's there
Like you and your thoughts
They're there too
But no one can see them or you
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If you look at my location you might find some similarity between it and my poem.
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I said I was sorry
Why won't you believe me
It makes no sense
I didn't even do a thing
But that might be it
I didn't do anything
And you wanted me too
I'm sorry if I was wrong
I didn't know
You should have told me
That you weren't alright
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Keep an close eye on them and make sure nobody around where you live is a spy for Iraq. Or from Iraq.

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People gather round
I've got soemthing to say
I want to tell to you about me
How I come in the night
Trying to gather all I can
Bringing them with me
To tell them two word they coulnd't imagine
I'd say on a night like this
And those words are
HAPPY HALLOWEEN
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I just did this one because I was running out of ideas.
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