Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 Thanks, but it's a long time until halloween. So I'd probably forget it by then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 You wouldn't forget it if you wrote it down and put it some where safe. But that might not work if you forget about that place safe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 I forget where I put everything. I don't have a lot of room in my room since I have so much stuff, so I just put it on top of something then it falls and gets sucked up in the vacumm. Follow me To the world of no end Follow me To the place of fear Follow me To the room of hate As long as you follow me Into the place we first met Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 My stuff gets stuck with my video games or books. My room use to a mini strage room, pluse my rooms small and I loose ever thing. Your rooms most likely clearner them mine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 No, it's probably not. I just cleaned it today. Before that I had clothes, books, games, cards, cups, soda cans, and basically everything else all over the place. You imagine how much money I found under my bed. And I don't have any clothes in my closet so hangers were all over the floor. I have to put everythihgn in boxes then find somewhere to put the box.:babble: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mitch Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 [size=1] Although there's nothing against two posters posting constantly after one another, I would like it if you guys put more thoughts into your critiques. Because it's just like double posting in a lot of ways to say, "Oh yeah, I love that," just so the other person can post again. The falls in the way of spam, or near there. All of your guys' posts in these threads certainly aren't all like that, but a lot also are, from what I've skimmed through in here. So try and put some thought into your posts, at least look like you're not just posting to post. Another thing. Stay on topic as well. If you guys want to talk about personal stuff, then use PMs for it. This isn't the place to do it, okay? Thank you. I'm sorry if I came off all mean, because I certainly am not meaning to. Just try to do some of the things I said, if you just possibly can't do them all.[/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 Sorry, Mitch. We'll try to be more responsible.:) Send me from my world The world that tells me nothing The only thing that tells me nothing Unlike the wind and rain They love me and so I do them You though world are so cruel I'm tired of you Always trying to keep me away From the things you think don't concern me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 Wow, I like that one too. And as dayday said early sorry mitch.We'll try to be more responsible. Againt that was great. keep writting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 I will. I've been writing this long and I'm not stopping now. The air is moving through me The breath of life Not the same as this air This air feels like rain Hard and icy beating on me hard In single drops falling down Coming from up above Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 Was rain air and air rain? Sorry, I didn't get that. It sounded really good though, what where you thinking about when you started to write that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 Air was rain in that one, not the other way around. When I wrote it I was thinking about my second poem about rain, and what the moderator said in your thread.*shrugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 18, 2003 Share Posted June 18, 2003 I see so air was rain. Today just since I read the post by the moderator I've written more poems. I guess when the moderators say something it makes people think more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Here's the next one Past,Present,Future Where do I live Sometimes it feels like the past Always doign things the old way Sometimes the presetn Doing the same as everyone else For the future I'm trying to keep up Trying ot stay with everyone Not getting left behind Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 o_O I feel like that alot. Doing things at a different pace as every one else, it bugs me sometimes though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 I ran out of poems a long time ago. Probably two or three days. Since then I've been doing it off the top of my head. Look at the sky So many envy it Trying to wonder how it does The things it do Filling in every inch of space above Doing so many different things at a time Trying to make people happy and sad Angry, sournful,confused With the things that the sky does All at the same time All a different way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 I like mostly because it's started to make me think aboout the sky...Never really thought of it be for. Anyways I like, and it's good to just pull them off the top of your head. It's fun that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Why won't it stop Why won't this pain ever stop It keeps dragging me from what I love The things that mean the world to me The pain takes it away Far from me To the places I cannot go To the place that I am not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Evil pain...Hey is this another one you pulled off the top of your head? Cause I really like this one, pain takes you far from the things you need most. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Yeah this one's from the top of my head. I'll just write something as I'm posting. Next one's a thriplet. Only thrre lines. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Taken away from me Far from my home Far across the sea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Lucky, I have problems pulling poems off the top of my head. This one seems like a part 2 for the one before it. Most people feel this way when something is very dear to them is gone. A 3lined poem, I could never do that...very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 They're easy, just summarize what you want to say into three lines. This one's a haiku, very simple to do. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ People are staring Staring straight into my heart Staring at my soul Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Very good haiku, I can't write haikus. I'll try to summarize what I think and feel. I'd get more post up tnen, anyways I love how you say that when they staring their staring at your soul. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Who knows what love is Is it just feelings Is it just sex Is it just being together With a specail person Who knows what it is Maybe a simple little kiss It makes no sense what people say Love is just a word A word wiht no meaning at all ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I don't really believe this. I just wrote it for a poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Epsilon Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 o_O...glade you really don't think that and it is really just a poem. Although I'm sure some people with broken hearts may think that. I like it though, although I don't feel that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest dayday Posted June 19, 2003 Share Posted June 19, 2003 Lighted pathes guide my way To the places I go All the one's that I belong in All that I can live in Those worlds are the ones I can stand The ones I can stand The ones I can stand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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