TheHackman Posted January 14, 2003 Posted January 14, 2003 Lets see howmany of you have felt this way on a cold winter day... [U]Ectasy[/U] I step into the shower I slide the glass frame of he window to the left and immediately I am battered. Whipped with the harsh tendrils of a cold wind brewing outside. The lashes give me goosebumps. My skin turns ashy; gray. I turn on the faucet in hopes of drenching myself in a succulent aura of warmth to relieve the agony and pain caused by my nearly subzero assailant. I lift the plug on the newly furnished brass tap. Immediately I feel sprinkles of warmth upon my face, and trickling down the nakedness of my body. Warmth aginst cold, wind vs. water, as though the forces of nature were waging a was on my bare skin. But the warmth is overwhelming. Enraptured in this state of being, my eyes blurr, my thoughts wander, and dreams start to form.
Bing Posted January 14, 2003 Posted January 14, 2003 [size=1][color=darkblue] Woah, that's a great piece of writing. I really like that, you have put my feeling into a poem for me! That's a great piece, especially seeing as you're new, and some people first piece are pooey (no offence) *offends self* damn it O_o;;;[/color][/size]
vegeta rocker Posted January 22, 2003 Posted January 22, 2003 Whoa! Hackman you rule. That is just excellent. It goes into my book of favorites definetly. I love the whole vision aspect, to me if i can picture it well. Its a winner.
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