Writing Figuring the Pain

[Losing Faith]

i can still feel your
breath.
your hands.
soft and
(cold).

i can still feel your
power.
your lips.
vicious and
(bleeding).

for you,
to me,
what you did
was a natural thing
for you,
to me,
pain never
left it's scars

i can still feel the
hate.
my soul.
shattered and
(vengeful).

i can still feel the
rage.
my spirit.
flaming and
(living dead).

for you.
to me.
the screams are
eternal.
i can't wash the
(filth)
of your body
(off)

for you.
to me.
your hurt
will never end.

better start
(figuring the pain)

[Epsilon]

This poem...I love it. Nothing like I write, your's has much more feeling to them. LosingFaith you have much talent! Keep writing!:)

[Guest dayday]

That was perfect. If I could write something like that I would definetly. It would have gotten me an eve better grade on my poem project at school.