Writing Depression Zone

[Satori Night]

Hello! Time for my depressing Poetry!!!

It's called Reality.



The reality is the cage
Surrouding by flickering flame
Do you think you can escape?
Think again
You can't touch the flames
Of this reality's cage
You can't escape
Mere mortal
For outside is the air
The sky, the sea, the land
The freedom of dreaming
That you can only glimpse
Through flickering flame
Barred you into existence
I think you mistaken
Your state for something real
Or maybe you mistaken
Yourself for real
Either way you cannot escape
The flickering flame

[Guest sonicdivision]

someone cut my wrist,
so i can fit in with this
this open discussion
on boring depression

woe is me

[Satori Night]

....That was...a nice review...not very helpful.

[wiccansamurai]

Well, its better than a lot of the stuff I see here. My only problems are the fact it could be a bit f prose if the lines weren't seperated. It doesn't have much rythme.

Don't worry, sonicdivision is banned now :D