Writing Paths [E]

[Retribution]

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[B]Paths[/B]
The path of life twists
And gets lost in the thick woods
How many are left?[/center]

Well, I sort of wrote this one in 2 minutes. Good for a speed haiku?

[Moi]

This is a nice "speed" haiku, lol. It shows your feelings well, it is very clearly stated I think, so not much else to say. Nice work. ;)

[Shugo54]

[FONT=Book Antiqua]Good job, it gives a good description of the landscape. I give it an 8. it's really good. I see you are a fellow haiku writer. well keep up the good work.[/FONT]