Dragonz Fyre Posted October 18, 2002 Posted October 18, 2002 Relentless Standing, holding, Swinging the blade, Cutting, molding, A legend is made Wind around, It swirls, it chops, As they cut him down, He begs?he stops Falls too his knee?s, Each blade falls to their side, He cries, he pleads Some time to bide. Talking, crying, He holds his chest. Sheathing the swords, sighing, They think, now we can rest. Closes his eyes, They stand, they stare, His breath, it dies, He?s out of air. Stagnate and red, Held in a case, They know that he?s dead, Wishing he?d been born, part of another race. Lets be part of the fight against racism
Pressure Posted October 19, 2002 Posted October 19, 2002 [color=purple] Ooh. Amazing. That was amazing. Racism is not fun. I love your words.[/color]
Sere Tuscumbia Posted October 19, 2002 Posted October 19, 2002 I applaud you. Great work. Seems like it's something different at first, and the end makes you go back and read it again. Love it.
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