Talon Posted November 14, 2002 Posted November 14, 2002 [center][color=teal][font=times new roman]A simple flick of mortal wrist One, Two! One, Two! And thus the vorpal blade cuts through and through! As of a man in love-struck tryst Amen! Amen! As a young woman dances o'er field and fen! Does a boxer rely on strength of the fist? Of course! Of course! He'll fight to the fiercest 'till his energy's hoarse! Is a snake friendly when by vice it has hissed? Not so! Not so! You must heed its warning and by strain, just go! When a star's light is dimmed, does it go missed? Too true! Too true! For of stars in the sky, there are too few![/size][/font][/color][/center] ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Come on, be honest....it sucked, right?
BearsBaby635 Posted November 23, 2002 Posted November 23, 2002 [color=blue] Well Fox I can hardly read it. and the parts I can bring back a few memories. *sighs* well it's pretty...all of your writings are good so don't you give me that crap about it sux! :) [/color]
Phantom Posted November 23, 2002 Posted November 23, 2002 Its good.... Reminds me of a song.... My head was bobbing back and forth when you do the "one two, one two" , and the whole repeating thingy... its momentous.. :)
Talon Posted November 23, 2002 Author Posted November 23, 2002 [color=teal]Uh....thanks. lol. It's just something I got into my head a while back. The "one two, one two" thing I got back when I was reading Lewis Caroll's "Jabberwocky" for my English teacher and from there I decided to repeat everything. Thanks.[/color]
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