Writing Despair

[wiccansamurai]

The words that never touched her
at least not to their eyes.
The love she never felt
Lost in a world full of lies.
Trapped in shades of gray and white
She cries alone
Far from unfeeling light.
The world swallows her color,
Her soul is envoloped in hate.
her eyes are clouded in pain,
She gives in to her final fate.
:(

[Vicky]

Thats nice. It sound like a poem that I wrote. Hope you do another, because I would love to read it! Have you seen mine? I did; The dragon king, The howler, full moon fever, death of my best friend and a peom of peace.

[wiccansamurai]

ill be sure too read ^.^

[Shinkoru]

Verry nice, and verry deep. Ide not change it a bit, this is one of your better ones. 10/10 :) Nice job.

[wiccansamurai]

thankies! (i like that first 10 Oo)