DarK DeatH Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 OK, here goes a poem I wrote one of these blue days... ----- Only a Scar Was Left This scar you left in my heart, will it heal? The lost love now turned into sorrow, can't you feel? The burning sadness that corrodes my soul, is it real? A scar that's always with me, for what you're never. What hurts and gives me pain, as you do ever. Now I cry over this lost love, now and forever. ----- Tell me what you all think of it... I know it's short, but my poems are usually short... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John2 Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 Its a great piece. Being short is not bad, the simplest things are some of the most beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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