Writing Not There

[Epitome]

I wake up
Get in the shower
and rrush my teeth
later that hour

Walk down stairs
Eat my breakfast
nothing to do
doing nothing

Go up to my room
wipe off the mirror
Its what I see
Its what I dont see

Im not there
Im. Not. There
Thats what Im saying
Im. not there

Having nothing to do
Later that night
My life is over
Over with a knife

My first one, go easy on me

[Phantom]

Its really interesting because when I dont detect ryhme I look for a deeper meaning.

When I cannot detect a deeper meaning I look for some theme. I found your theme. It was suicide. I didnt understand your message though.

If I was to depict it, it might be a suicide letter, but the way it is wrote, it shows no pain. No reasons, even if there are good reasons.

Its intrigueing, to say the least.

*Looks at it more* , you know I am missing something.

[Epitome]

Its about someone who kills himslef because no one ever bothers to even notice him. Thats where I got Im not there from. The beggining supposed to be a regular day of his parents not even saying hello or anything.

[Phantom]

Depression has hit me pretty hard recently. I'm sorry I didnt notice that..It was pretty obvious. *smacks self* I'm sorry.

[Epitome]

No its okay, It was my first one, probably was hard to understand.

[Sara]

[size=1]Nah, it was okay.

Eff... You conveyed pretty well what you were going for. Sort of a dull, empty, bored feeling about it, too.[/size]

[Epitome]

Yea it was supposed to be like that. I wanted to make it feel like he was like nothing in the world. And if it was bad it was my first one so be nice please.