Sky Moonflow Posted May 27, 2003 Posted May 27, 2003 [COLOR=crimson]You walk away from me You must hate me I do not walk away from you I don't hate you I scream you name You don't hear me I yell an yell But no reply still I cry letting my tears fall down Everything spinning around I wish you woluld come back But evryting goes black Within this poem of free will Lies a message unsaid Standing forevr still I call out you name once again But still nothing I call once more Then you are forever gone [/color] -Sky
KittyLynn Posted May 27, 2003 Posted May 27, 2003 [FONT=century gothic][SIZE=1][COLOR=dodgerblue]Nice but it sounded like you were trying to rhyme, but the only word you thought of were those. It was good, and I'm sure the thought is there, just not the right words. ^^[/COLOR] [/SIZE] [/FONT]
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