Writing dispite

[Guest Chris]

[color=green]i messed up agian
said something i shouldn't
try to do what's right
i tryed, but couldn't
i caused another pain
caused another strife
caused another to quit
to take their own life
why do i come off as
a self-rightous jerk
that i don't even care
if another may hurt
why can't i do right
am i really that cursed
that no matter what i say
it will always be the worst
dear loving God i pray
that maybe once tommarow
i won't cause another
to feel all this sorrow[/color]

[eleanor]

O_o You sound too depressed, lol. Nice poem! It's really good.