Writing A short poem...

[Snufkin]

I need an opinion on this one. What does it make you think about? I've asked quite a few people about it and get several different answers...

Try:

Extend your hand
Even if it's too late
Let me try and save you
From your terrible state
Let me hold your palm
Grasp your wrist
And try...
At least then I'll know
I never gave up
And I'd be the last
You thought of
So let me hold your hand
Let my heart beat alongside yours
Let both our tears pour
Let me miss you before you're gone
And try...

[Epsilon]

To me it's like a friend or lover, wants to help the one they love. And if they fail to at least let the person know they tryed there hardest. It's a good poem.

[Snufkin]

Thanks! Surprisingly I haven't heard that one yet, but it does go along with what it symbolizes. Finally someone figures it out. Er...anyway, thanks Ruby.

[Guest dayday]

It looks to me like you're saying that even when it's too late you still want to help them. And when you know that you did then it'll make it all better after they're gone.

[T man]

It makes me think of oultlaw star, rerouni kenshin or your trying to help some one when you can't and you still try.:demon:

[Snufkin]

Wow...this is kind of strange. Rurouni Kenshin and Outlaw Star huh? I've never had those as answers either. A lot of things make me think of Kenshin though. ^^