kai Posted July 17, 2003 Posted July 17, 2003 This is the first original drawing that I have done in a long time. Most of the shading is scratchy, her shirt is a bit boring, and her mouth seems to be missing, constructive criticism needed... [url]http://www.hostmysig.com/data/repgwbush/dark%20angel3.JPG[/url]
juna Posted July 17, 2003 Posted July 17, 2003 The eyes and hair are amazing.... nice work... ^_^ Now for the criticism, the shoulders look very weird, too high, makes her look like a beefed up football player. Mouth yes, missing, along with a nose...there looks to be something in that area, but not really anything that resembles either or. Her right breast is larger, and placed oddly, then her left one... and lastly, are those wings or a shawl? I likie Kai, you shade very well, can't wait to see what else youpost. ^_^
kai Posted July 17, 2003 Author Posted July 17, 2003 Thanks, most places I go, people don't criticize, they just say "nice job," and "keep up the good work." I do see what you are saying, and thanks again.
Mina Posted July 17, 2003 Posted July 17, 2003 Yes, too love the hair and eyes. The nose is fine and the mouth, as I can see it, is there. It is very anime. ^^ The shoulders do look misplaced. The chest area is a bit misaligned, but the shading is better than anything I could do.
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