Writing . . .

[Silent]

((I got inspiration for this from that song at the end of Cowboy Bebop,Session 5[Ballad of Fallen Angels],but I didn't use any of the lyrics--since I don't actually know any of the lyrics--so don't freak on me.))

"(I walk in the rain)
Where the fallen angels lie
(I walk in the rain)
Where the light comes to die
(I walk in the rain)
Beneath the darkest skies
(I walk in the rain)
To the shadows I confide
(I walk in the rain)
Where the puddles become home
(I walk in the rain)
Where I stay pained and alone
(I walk in the rain)
Where everyone suffers
(I walk in the rain)
Where everyone can't help but hurt each other
(I walk in the rain)
Where life isn't so bad
(I walk in the rain)
So long as it ends the first time

[Zen]

Wow, thats very, very well done. You are good at combining words and the chorus idea is great. 12/10. :D