Assassin Posted September 19, 2003 Posted September 19, 2003 [size=1][color="666666"] [ Beautiful Nature ] The Grass blowing slightly in the wind. The Deer jumping ever so slightly. Eagle's soar through the sky. The rain drops from the air above. Snow flakes falling into soft like hair. Ice on the sides of a small tree limb. Nature is so wonderful. Nature is unassuring. Beautiful nature around us. Aoshi Shinimori [/color][/size]
Guest Skyechild91 Posted September 19, 2003 Posted September 19, 2003 Not bad, Josh. LOok @ my poem Dark Hearts for help, cuz this is okay, but needs work. sorrys!
Assassin Posted September 19, 2003 Author Posted September 19, 2003 [size=1][color="666666"] Yep sure does, good thing it ain't my best. I just made it up in around two minutes. Well any ways the poem is trying to say what the nature does and stuff. [/color][/size]
Whiteblaze Posted September 20, 2003 Posted September 20, 2003 This one is good, but I don't get the 'unassuring' part, Aoshi. I do like the second stanza though. Hmm . . . not your best?! :therock:
Assassin Posted September 20, 2003 Author Posted September 20, 2003 [size=1][color="666666"] Thanks Yami, Yes its not my best. I wipped it up really quick. I wrote a similar poem for a friend to turn in as his home work. Any way I like the first stanza also. And thanks for complimenting. [/size][/color]
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