Writing Never Enough

[vegeta rocker]

man it's been awhile since i posted anything. Had writers block, well actually i still kinda do. This is a first draft of a totally free hand non rhyming poem. I would really appreciate some bashing criticizing replies. I have never posted a poem at such an early stage in it's development so it definetly needs to be ripped apart.
So please, spare no expense. I have a thick skin.


Never Enough

Sometimes my sadness
digs so deep
i choke on it

and nearly spit it up
then it latches on
once again

never enough
no it's never
enough

i can feel it
as it retreats
inside of me

once more merging
with my blood and
reproducing with
my tainted cells

like a parasite
fixed to my
soul

sometimes my sadness
runs so deep
i choke on it

and nearly spit it up

always nearly
never enough
it's never enough