Writing Heart, Mind, and Soul

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[font=arial]Well, here it is. My masterpeice. I'd like some comments on this one.[/font]
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[color=seablue][size=1][u]Heart, Mind, and Soul[/u]

Walking down this path again,
I see the stars and the way they shine,
And the way the river bends

I know the way now to the heart of the forest,
I can follow the path marked in my mind, and step into infinity

Once again, I step into my light
I can see the way to walk, and I shall take that path
The path marked in my heart

No matter, how the darkness flows 'round my feet
Its cry cannot be heard, drowned by the crashing waves

I know the way to the heart of the sea
I can follow the path marked in my soul, and step into infinity

Walking down this path again,
I see the way the fire burns,
And the way the trees sing

I know the way now to the solace of the stars,
I can follow the path marked in my mind, and step into infinity

Once again, I step into my light,
I can see the path marked 'cross my soul,
And the way I should walk, to reach my infinity[/size][/color]

[Inuyashagurl_15]

That is very good. I have seen many great ones this would be my 2nd faveroit. It is so cool. I usually dont like things with light and kinda happy but I can make an aception with this! :D