Writing To the butterflies

[wiccansamurai]

Salvation you bring to bright flowers
taking them to utmost bliss!
Carrying pollen out of dark,
Despondence fading...
Drifting out of somber grotto
Amiable gift of life
Time melting away frivolous torment
Palatable gentle wings.
Enfolding ebony souls of flowers
In variegated numb
Wind dancing through wings
That carry you to paradise,
Bringing with
children of the petals.

[maikiratori]

I really like the word choice in this poem..It's not everyday you see words put together like that to form the ideas in one's head that I thought of... but I'm an oddball so that might just be me...lol

[Isus]

i love it!!!!

[wiccansamurai]

Thanx!!! its an ode i worte for creative writing.