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Wow, those are a heck lot better then what I could ever do! The flow is pretty good, some times it flows away, but I think they are both pretty good.
I noticed a few spelling errors like, too should have been two, but tose things happen alot. Im not the biggest fan of Rhyming poems because they are pretty complicated to make and sometimes don't make sense because of the word placed in the area, but I think you did very well on both of them.

Sense Im not a writer, I won't rate your poems, but I do think they are good.
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All poems added together two spelling errors, and two punctuation errors. Heh, I'm picky lately. You're one of the best poets I've read here on the boards thus far. The lines of the poems flow great together, and they don't stray away from the main idea. Personally, I love the subjects that these poems are based around.

Poem: Crashing

10/10

Poem: Screaming

10/10

Poem: Torment

10/10

Great job, Myth. I look forwards to more of your writings.

PS - Love your sig.
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