KKC Posted November 28, 2003 Posted November 28, 2003 Wow, those are a heck lot better then what I could ever do! The flow is pretty good, some times it flows away, but I think they are both pretty good. I noticed a few spelling errors like, too should have been two, but tose things happen alot. Im not the biggest fan of Rhyming poems because they are pretty complicated to make and sometimes don't make sense because of the word placed in the area, but I think you did very well on both of them. Sense Im not a writer, I won't rate your poems, but I do think they are good.
wiccansamurai Posted November 28, 2003 Posted November 28, 2003 Ahhh, those were so great. The last one makes me want to cry... I like the part in the first one, "But she was entitled the right to throw a fit." And I really liked the second one, altogether. They flowed real easily and the ryhming was done really well.
Guest Skyechild91 Posted November 28, 2003 Posted November 28, 2003 First- 10/10 Second- 10/10 Yeah, thats what I said. You have got skill. these kick *$$!!!!!
black_insanity Posted November 28, 2003 Posted November 28, 2003 Awesome. My words can't seem to truly express how I actually feel about these poems... 10/10.
Epsilon Posted November 28, 2003 Posted November 28, 2003 All poems added together two spelling errors, and two punctuation errors. Heh, I'm picky lately. You're one of the best poets I've read here on the boards thus far. The lines of the poems flow great together, and they don't stray away from the main idea. Personally, I love the subjects that these poems are based around. Poem: Crashing 10/10 Poem: Screaming 10/10 Poem: Torment 10/10 Great job, Myth. I look forwards to more of your writings. PS - Love your sig.
wiccansamurai Posted November 28, 2003 Posted November 28, 2003 Okay, I said the second one almost made me cry, but the third one really did make me cry. 11 out of ten... *wipes tears off her cheeks* They're all so sad.... Write some more, I like crying... I guess that's weird, but these poems are so great!
Stuart Posted December 1, 2003 Posted December 1, 2003 Ahh wow, those are really great.. and long, Really good. I wanna know more... what your write.. p.s. dont mind me reading these, I WONT say anything at school ^_~
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