Turkey Posted January 5, 2004 Posted January 5, 2004 This is second B&W render for the competition I'm in. The first one was Fantasy, so i decided to make the second one Sci-Fi. In this one, I want to give off a vision of loss and slow turn into chaos. Right now, I haven't fully captured that. Any help on getting it right?
AzureWolf Posted January 8, 2004 Posted January 8, 2004 I think the perspective leaves it too uninteresting. It's great that you were trying a new angle to make the picture from, but keep that exploding thing (in the background) at the center of the picture (or rendering?). I would like to see the mass exit from that angle. Also, I'm not an artist, nevermind a CG one, so I don't know how hard it would be to had more texture onto the ships and... heads (?). I think it would still pay-off no matter how hard it is to do. Hope that helps.
Turkey Posted January 9, 2004 Author Posted January 9, 2004 It laughed at me...I laughed at it...We laughed together...And somehow I managed to finish it. In-between versions 2 and 3, I lost it and deleted most of the objects. Then, I made some new ships for the center focus, and put more emphazis(sp?) on action. Even though I like what I did, I feel no satisfaction when I look at it. I guess you can't always win....
Sara Posted January 9, 2004 Posted January 9, 2004 [size=1]I like the second a lot better than the first. And I have to say, the black-and-whiteness is just plain cool.[/size]
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