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Ryoko Matsushita

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Hmm... this one is interesting, although her attraction to her father seems a bit unnatural, but its entirely possible. The brother-sister interaction is quite accurate, and the thoughts/speech match the characters well. My biggest question is, what exactly is the plot? No offense, but these two chapters seem to be sort of like set-up chapters, rather than story chapters. Please correct me if I'm wrong,
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