Grey Aurora Posted March 14, 2004 Share Posted March 14, 2004 Well, I'm new here if you hadn't guessed. ^_^ Anyway, I'm pretty well versed in poetry so I thought I would post mine and see what you guys think of it. I urge you to give some kind of constructiive criticism, so I can further my writing ability. And, I write a poem once every 2 weeks so I will update this regularly. Enjoy. [COLOR=DarkRed]Meeting My Shadow An overcast sky commanded attention On the day that I met my shadow Grey met black and black met void As the roiling clouds passed overhead On the day I that met my shadow Trials flitted past me to my left and right On the day that I met my shadow Sinister pressure had me in foul clutches Ancient wounds began to gape anew On the day that I met my shadow My blind faith was blinded further On the day that I met my shadow Sight came with knowing As my shadow erupted from the earth On the day that I met my shadow From depths of the abyss it raised up On the day that I met my shadow To snatch me from the jaws of depression And breathe breath into me once more On the day that I met my shadow That moment pulled my perspective On the day that I met my shadow It was me and I was it for a span of time I now walk casting no shadow Since the day I met my shadow No one knew any more On the day that I met my shadow That every shadow is more than black Because they are only disguises For our guardian angels, who are forever with us Which you will figure out on the day That you meet your own shadow[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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