Guest MangaFreak Posted September 15, 2004 Posted September 15, 2004 Do You Know Me Do you know me? Do you feel me tugging at your mind Do you see me? I?m sitting in the corner crying Do you hear me? Do you hear my shriveled cries Do you notice? Do you even realize Do you know me? Do see me pass in the hall Do you even, Recognize my face at all Do you see me? I?m waiting in the streets Do you feel me? I?m lying at your feet Do you know me? Do you see me sitting on your step Do you notice, All the tears that I have wept Do you feel me? I?m clinging to you tight Do you hear me, Calling out in the night Do you know me? Do you know me the way I know you Do you see me? Do you notice this is all for you Do you hear me, Calling out your name Do you know me, Or am I just a game Do you know me? Do you know about the things I do Do you sense me? Do see the way I?ve been abused Do you hear me? Do you hear my empty voice Do you notice, Or don?t you have a choice Do you know me, Or am I just a faze Do you want to Or do you hope I?ll fade away Could you hold me, When all my fears come true Could you whisper, The words I want you to ok, not one of my best or darkest poems but what do you think? I'd lik an honest and critacal answer As long as you're not bull Shitting me ok? good Thanks alot
Guest Amun Ra Posted September 15, 2004 Posted September 15, 2004 Wow that was pretty good but a little depressing try wrighting about something that makes you happy. otherwiseit's a very good poem that is skillfuly put together :D :bawl: :sick: :alcohol: :flasher: :blah: :modrod: :fart: :faint: :flush: OOOOOOH These signs are so cute!!! :blowup: :bash: :rotflmao: GOOD WORK! ^^
Guest MangaFreak Posted September 15, 2004 Posted September 15, 2004 ok, but what if i tell you making depressing poems make me happy? isn't that an oxymoron what i mean to say is i get a certain satisfaction out of dark literature its just how i was put together
Spiritbreeze Posted September 20, 2004 Posted September 20, 2004 [QUOTE=MangaFreak]ok, but what if i tell you making depressing poems make me happy? isn't that an oxymoron what i mean to say is i get a certain satisfaction out of dark literature its just how i was put together[/QUOTE] Why is it dark and dreary never weary and are found as such a nice sound and please so much? (srry, that was my really lame attempt to reply in rhyme) :rolleyes:
Lady Asphyxia Posted September 21, 2004 Posted September 21, 2004 [font=Verdana][size=1]Since MangaFreak has been banned, I don't really see the point in continuing this thread.[/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1][/size][/font] [font=Verdana][size=1]Thread Closed.[/size][/font]
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