Writing Paper Cut-Out Boy [PG]

[Patronus]

Here's a poem that I have majorly edited from its original version. No real reason to it's creation. Constructive criticism please.

[size=4]You walked away broken-hearted
You swore you'd never come back
Your tears are drowning me
And I think it's because

I'm a paper cut-out boy
And I've given you a paper cut
One that you won't soon forget
I hope that it stings

I had you wrapped around my finger
Your ignorance was annoying
And I couldn't take it anymore
I had to drop you like a bad habit

I'm a paper cut-out boy
And I've given you a paper cut
One that you won't soon forget
I hope that it stings
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[de1ayna]

Hmm.I dont really understand this...
But I do like that it has a nice flow to it and that the words are not forced.(I say that a lot)