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[COLOR=DeepSkyBlue][CENTER]Ever Be
Where am I going?
I do not know.
My soul has lost its way
Hoping someday my soul
Will find it?s way back.
My heart barely beats.
Longing for it to mend.
My wounds are so profound.
Desperately seeking to cure.
Even if my soul finds its way,
my heart mends,
And my wounds cure.
Will it ever be the same?[/CENTER]

By Evelyn Soto
Note: this poem was written by my mother, she wants people to give constructive critisism. I personally love this poem, just read between the lines...I get the poetic talent from her. :animeswea

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