Ellven'and Posted May 21, 2005 Share Posted May 21, 2005 [FONT=Arial][SIZE=2]Nhievh ran his hand over the leather straps that encompassed his entire body. "These sinners actually put up a fight today, Blood Singer," he said to the dagger at his side. "Perhaps it was because they wanted to repent..." He wheeled around, casting one last glance over all the bodies that now lay on the ground before him. He smirked to himself, recalling all the screams that had rung in the cool morning air that day, and licked his fingers, tasting the coppery blood that still dampened them. He lifted his black, matted hair away from his left eye socket long enough for it to feel the warm afternoon air. This socket, which was now stitched shut and empty, had once contained an eye with a beautiful light blue color; however, due to the witches that stole him from his home twenty years ago, he had to remove it and stitch it shut himself. He bent over, low to the ground, and ran, his arms trailing behind him, until he came to a serene spring in the center of the village. A priest lay on the far bank, his head split down the center and his intestines trailing out of his back from where Nhievh had relentlessly sliced him open. Nhievh cackled in his wispy, almost inaudible voice, and a flash of memory came to him. ~~~ "Why are you doing this!?" the priest yelled to him. "You are a sinner, Man of God. You deserve far worse than this. I am merely showing you mercy." "Don't do this! God still loves you!" Nhievh raised his dagger and gracefully brought his arms down, dissecting the priest's face in half. Though no blood fell from his head, Nhievh knew that he had successfully cut the priest's head open; however, the priest did not know this and started to run. As he showed his back to Nhievh, he raised his dagger again and sliced sideways this time, catching the priest in the back and spilling his blood on the ground. His intestines hung out of the gaping slash in his back, and he fell, his face landing only inches from the serene spring and his head splitting in two. "Fuck God," Nhievh said. "He is the one that caused those damn witches to take me from home. I hate him." ~~~ A scowl now on his face, Nhievh took to running the way he had been before he saw the short work he had made of the priest. Coming to a thick forest, he entered, hoping to find more sinners to cleanse.[/SIZE][/FONT] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ozymandius Jones Posted May 21, 2005 Share Posted May 21, 2005 [COLOR=DarkOrange]Hello, Ellven'and. I'm afraid that this does not belong in the Adventure Square for one of two reasons. First of all, it seems like a story. If it is the start of a story, it would need to be in the OB [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/forumdisplay.php?f=87]Anthology[/URL]. If this is meant to be used as an RP, however, first it has to go through a recruiting stage in the [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/forumdisplay.php?f=48]Inn[/URL], so that we don't have the Square cluttered with abandoned RPs that no one cared to carry on. Information on the Inn, the Square, Recruiting and the such like can be found in the Square's sticky, [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44317]here[/URL]. Feel free to start recruiting for an RP such as Necroterra once you have read through all the information. Thanks -Ozy[/COLOR] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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