shakon Posted June 29, 2005 Posted June 29, 2005 Okay, so, here I am again, in DESPERATE need of critiquing and advice in the art department. it's a page from my manga (tomodachi), and, even though it's not done yet (words, and my art assistant's gonna spruce it up slightly), I was wondering if anybody could critique the art.. y'know, tell me what's good about it, what I can improve on, what I NEED to improve on... yeah... that'd be GREAT! [url]http://tomodachi.t35.com/pictures/ch7/705.JPG[/url] That would be the page. So, if you could say a few words on it, that'd be highly appreciated. Thanks! :catgirl:
Darker Alucard Posted June 29, 2005 Posted June 29, 2005 Huh, The Site doesn't exist. Maybe it's in the matrix. but you got to retrievee it shakon
shakon Posted June 29, 2005 Author Posted June 29, 2005 No, it's there... you just kinda have to refresh it once you get the "cannot find server" page. It'll come up... ^^;; should have mentioned that.
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