Writing Poem for your loved ones.(yer girlfreind or boyfreind)

[Kain]

Tell me if I should make some changes:

We sit under the stars
and talk abou things
we would do.But now
we are closer than ever


We sit under the stars
looking deeply in each
others eyes.We both
lost in thought among
the heavenly sky,
Thinking the same
thoughts.

We sit under the stars
making this our last night
together under the cool
winter weather.We soon
make a promis,to always
see each other again
someday.

The stars soon fade away
when I here you say you
are going away.My heart
skips a beat and jumps out
of my chest.But there is
nothing I can do to change
your mind,so I say my last
goodbye.

[Fall]

I really don't think you should make [i]any[/i] changes to it.... It's great the way it is.. :)

[Kain]

Thanks.You people can use it if you want.