yulie-chan Posted February 28, 2002 Share Posted February 28, 2002 i've never posted anything on this site before, so i thought i'd give it a shot with my sucky poems. just wanna kno wut u all think of it. but dont tell me i spelled somethin wrong, cuz i dont care bout it. just to warn u, the poems arent that great, actually they suck, but hey, i tried. ok, so here i go.... sitting in my little corner alone in the dark, desperate for someone to see me, yet afraid to come out. people pass me by, one by one, not even trying to glance to see who i really am, not even once. i reach out my hand, grasping for something, anything. i end up empty handed. i try to call out, yet the air is filled with no sound. i am helpless. i try again and again, crying for someone to hear me, grasping for someone to reach me. but i get nothing... finally when i am almost done with, i felt one glance. i look up to see him reaching his hands out for mine. i dont know what to do at first, so i take his hands. the warmth of his on mine overwhelmes me, so sudden, so unexpected. he holds me in his arms as i cry, for i have not felt anything like this. so much power of the warmth and the love, the many years of hate just wash out from inside of me. they melt away like wax. not i feel safe in his arms, safe once again... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kittie Posted February 28, 2002 Share Posted February 28, 2002 [color=seagreen] i thought you were was veri beautiful! it has lots o' emotion in it...and it displays Love in a veri nice matter! great write! keep it up!! :D [/color] [size=1] in the last stanza first line you should change it to [b] now[/b] not [i] not[/i]! :blush: [/size] :wave: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted February 28, 2002 Share Posted February 28, 2002 *claps* Nice job Yulie! See I told you they weren't bad!! Even Kitty agrees with me!! So be happy! They are great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yulie-chan Posted March 3, 2002 Author Share Posted March 3, 2002 i guess i'll just keep postin up poems. here goes another one.... I'm lost in this world of darkness. I see no light to lead me, not even the stars to show me the way. I want to give up and not live the life i have now. Sometimes, i just dont want to go on. but whenever i think that, a little moment comes up. The little moment that make ur life worthwhile, the little moment that make u think everything will be alright, the little moment that warms you up when you are cold, the little moment that make you feel special. Those little moments... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spikey Posted March 3, 2002 Share Posted March 3, 2002 Not bad Farely good I would have to say myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sui Generis Posted March 14, 2002 Share Posted March 14, 2002 That last one is awesome yulie!! I really like it!! Those speical moments!! Heh ;)!! But keep writing! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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