Writing Moments

[Shadow Night]

Heres a little poem I wrote, you may not like it but its your opinion.

"For this moment I am here,
For the next I shall dissapear,
So to will my fear.
The next moment I will reappear,
My sins gone, my body clear,
I then shall whisper in your ear,
'Life will end but so to will fear.'

Please comment on what you think.:)

[Char!]

Wow, very deep, in a repetitive rhyming kinda way...