wow, you've been drawing since what...eleven?they're all really detailed and you managed to catch the natural "flow" of the characters pretty well.and the hands!my god i love your hands XD i can never draw hands for anyone.
on the whole they're damn good, you're talented...but maybe you should move on to thinner pens since thick markers make them seem somewhat....chibi-ish.it just doesnt look the way it does on those official images.then again, maybe its just cos they're not in colour :/