Aaryanna_Mom

The only time I ever check something like that is if I need something to laugh at. The other stuff like palm reading I outright ignore. Fortune cookies are just for fun. I never take any of them seriously though.

[quote name='Lady Asphyxia'][FONT=Arial][SIZE=2]It's sad. Apparently the father and daughter don't even talk anymore. Can you imagine going from choosing to live with someone to not even talking to them -- over a field trip? There were cracks in the relationship beforehand. There's no way that a fully functional relationship could disintegrate over something so stupid.[/SIZE][/FONT][/QUOTE]That is what I was just thinking. You know there had to have been other issues going on for something like that to utterly destroy the relationship. To stop talking over something like that is just stupid.

I haven't been around for the past two months, but I am now caught up on what's going on. If there's anything you want me to work into the story Shy, just let me know and I'll get it done.

[QUOTE=Allamorph][FONT=Arial]Well, that's all from me, guys. Heh. What'd you think of the big reveal? :p Oh, and Kathy, ma'am, probably the reason this bit has felt kind of familiar to you is because I pulled the concept straight from [U][I]The Cardinal of the Kremlin[/I][/U], one of Tom Clancy's novels. I encountered that technique for the first time in that book, and I remember being struck by how singularly effective it was, and how cruel it was at the same time. I had fun shaping this section. Thanks for giving me the opportunity.[/FONT][/QUOTE]Has it already been two months since I last logged in? Apparently so, If only real life would quit getting in the way. Anyway, you are correct, I do have that book and I have read it. Though it's been a while. I had forgotten about that paticular deal. Your assessment of it being effective and cruel is spot on. Thanks for your input in the rp hun. Twas fun while it lasted.

My bed is up high enough that I have some plastic containers that hold extra blankets and sheets for the bed. And other than perhaps some dust as well, that's it.

I was just reading about this, including this bit here: [URL="http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-1144244/Teenage-sister-boy-father-13-baby-age.html"][U]Teenage sister of boy who became a father at 13 had baby when she was the same age[/U][/URL] You'd think that the parents would have seen his older sister getting pregnant at such a young age, an indicator that they should be more alert when he got to the same age as well. The rest of it is pretty messed up so other than to find it sad, I'm done.

Sorry for the slight delay with my post since I know a couple of you were waiting on me to get that up. I think I got the details straight. It is a bit late for me so I'll check it again once I've rested.

[CENTER][IMG]http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee132/Runaway511/almagest%202/Davos_Frost.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER] There was no morning that Davos was not up early, hard at work behind her desk, reviewing Church matters. There was too much to be done for her to allow herself the luxury of sleeping in. This morning was no different and as soon as she entered her office, it was to see that there were several sealed messages waiting for her. She opened up the curtains to the French doors leading to the balcony. It was still just a tiny bit too cool out to actually open them up. She could see a hint of the approaching dawn; it was enough to show that it looked to be a clear sunny day once the sun came up. Davos took a seat and started working through the sealed letters first. Everything was pretty standard until she got to the second to last one. She looked at it, read it again and set it down. That would have to be dealt with first. She took a moment to make sure nothing else needed immediate attention before pulling out some paper and writing up several orders. Then she summoned one of the messengers assigned to her and sent them off. Once the door had closed behind the messenger she stood up and went over to open the balcony doors. It was nearly eight am and Anna would be along shortly with breakfast. But before that, she needed to take care of something else. She left her office and headed down the hallway. There were always guards about and she paid them no heed as the two assigned to her for the day fell in and followed along. Nothing was said as she veered unerringly towards her destination deep within the Citadel. Before long they came to a set of locked double doors. Davos, after unlocking them, let herself in, leaving the guards behind. It didn’t take her long to retrieve what she wanted. She took a moment to look at the map once she had retrieved it before she left the room and relocked the doors. To think that now, of all times, this would come up. [CENTER][IMG]http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee132/Runaway511/almagest%202/Davos_Frost.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee132/Runaway511/almagest%202/Elaine_Waltier.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee132/Runaway511/almagest%202/Felix_Achard.jpg[/IMG] [IMG]http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee132/Runaway511/almagest%202/Juste_Achard.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER] Davos looked at the trio standing on the other side of her massive wooden desk. She looked at each one as they waited for her to begin. High Captain Felix Achard, Cleric Juste Achard and Priestess Elaine Waltier. The former waiting expectantly for her orders, the latter two waiting with a slight look of confusion. Davos stood up. “[B]Thank you for coming[/B].” Davos was not one to waste time. “[B]I’ll get straight to the point. I’m assigning the three of you to retrieve the Xear artifacts on behalf of the Church.[/B]” “[B]So the map is real then.[/B]” Felix stated. “[B]Correct.[/B]” She picked up the map she had retrieved from storage and motioned for Felix to retrieve it. “[B]It’s located on the Vosper summit. That map will take you straight to it. I’ll be assigning you all to the [I]Ilbert[/I] for the trip. You’ll need the greater speed and cargo space if you are to get there first.[/B]” “[B]Uhh…[/B]” Waltier looked a bit confused and Davos understood; she didn’t fully understand why she was sending her along. “[B]You’re probably wondering why I’m sending you.[/B]” She asked. Waltier nodded. “[B]It’s simple; no journey should be without spiritual guidance. Also, though I’m sure it will fool no one, sending you out like we normally send a group will provide some small protection at first.[/B]” “[B]Of course Sief.[/B]” She looked to Juste, “[B]I’m sure I don’t need to tell you why you are going.[/B]” “[B]No. I’m not sure what we’re looking for though.[/B]” “[B]The first artifact is a large crystal with a Xear inscription on it. You’ll need that in order to determine where the next one is located.[/B]” She looked to each of them again before finishing. “[B]You have full authority to request any supplies you feel necessary Captain. Since the high elevation prevents airships from landing, you’ll need to take chimeras. I suggest all of you go and pack immediately, you are to leave as soon as possible.[/B]” "[B]One more thing,[/B]" She cautioned. "[B]This assignment is not officially recognized so please keep that in mind on your trip. It will of course be obvious that you were sent, but other than myself and a select few, no one knows of your assignment.[/B]" “[B]At once Sief,[/B]” Felix offered the proper bow of respect, the others doing so as well. Once the door closed she sat back down and leaned back into her chair. She placed the tips of her fingers together as she looked at the sunlight streaming into the room. She had given them everything they needed to get the artifact. Hopefully they would get there first.

[CENTER][IMG]http://i228.photobucket.com/albums/ee132/Runaway511/almagest%202/Davos_Frost.jpg[/IMG][/CENTER] Davos?s gaze swept the desk scattered with numerous reports still waiting for her attention. When she had first become Sief, she had almost felt like a prisoner, trapped behind a lock of paper as she attempted to keep up with the seemingly endless ledger books. At the time she had been mystified by why so many aspects of the Citadel?s upkeep had required the current Sief?s initials to prove it had been certified. Since then she had made minor alterations and delegated responsibility enough to allow her to still keep track of what was going on, without it interfering with more important Church matters. It was a danger that anyone as Sief had to cautiously guard against, keeping a close enough watch to maintain order, without overwhelming one?s self to the point that they were nothing more than a figurehead. She wrinkled her nose in distaste as she set aside the current reports she had been reviewing and stood up. Thirty years and yet she still found the task as tedious as she had back then. Davos moved to the double doors leading out to the balcony of her office. The massive doors already open to let the evening breeze in. A small wrought iron table and set of chairs graced the balcony and she moved around them to stand along the edge. Davos rested her palms on the stone railing as she took in a deep refreshing breath of the humid air. The view of the massive gardens in the center of the Citadel was, like always, soothing. The growing shadows as night approached played across the waters of the small pond in the center. Ducks sleeping with their heads tucked under their wings could be seen along the edge closest to the path winding through the garden. The gentle sound of unseen frogs croaking from within the reeds, along with the rustle of leaves from the breeze added to the restful view. It was like a soothing tonic and just as no day went without prayer and meditation, she always found a moment to enjoy the gardens. The sharp smell of salt water was in the air. Not as profound as the port, but recognizable enough. The Citadel, and the surrounding city, was situated back in the island, away from the few places where ships could actually land. The rest of the island was impossible to reach by sea, with massive cliffs that stretched straight up for hundreds if not thousands of feet. A soft knock brought her out of her musings and she moved back into the main room, taking a seat behind her desk before calling for whoever it was to enter. Considering the time, it was probably her aide Anna with the newest reports. The door opened to admit Anna?s head of curly blonde hair. She smiled and then let herself all the way in when Davos motioned for her to do so. ?[B]Good evening Sief, you look to be hard at work.[/B]? Anna had yet another stack of papers that she was holding up against her chest as she approached her desk. ?[B]I?ve got today?s reports. Would you like to have them now?[/B]? She looked at the reports scattered across the desk and then back to Davos. ?[B]You must be nearly finished with the others.[/B]? Davos folded her hands on the desk. ?[B]Go ahead and leave them here.[/B]? Anna set the pile down. ?[B]You look tired, would you like me to get some tea for you?[/B]? ?[B]That?s not necessary dear,[/B]? Davos said kindly. She would be leaving shortly for a meeting and didn?t have time for tea anyway. She did have time for perhaps a short walk in the gardens if she left immediately. Political discussions were always tiring and a walk would do wonders to mentally prepare her for it. She stood up. ?[B]I need a breath of fresh air before tonight?s meetings. Why don?t we go for a walk. You look like you could use a break as well.[/B]? Anna thought about it for a moment. ?[B]Well.... I guess I would like a short walk.[/B]? ?[B]Good,[/B]? Davos replied as she walked around her desk and led the way out and towards the gardens. She could tell that Anna was at a loss as to what to say, friendly or not, many aides were too hesitant to step forward. That too was something she had gotten used to. ?[B]I understand that there?s been a bit of mischief by the younger novices in the kitchens lately.[/B]? She couldn?t help but smile a little at Anna?s startled look and then slight look of embarrassment. Davos knew that Anna?s own boy had been one of the instigators of the food fight. It certainly didn?t hurt anyone, she was only sorry she hadn?t been there to see one of the stuffier Cardinal's, Kevin, covered in mashed potatoes. ?[B]I?m terribly sorry about that.[/B]? Anna started to apologize but Davos cut her off. ?[B]Nonsense, a little silly fun never hurt anyone.[/B]? She asserted with a wave of her hand. Davos continued to fire off questions as they took one of the paths through the garden. It was a pity she rarely had time for everyday conversation such as this. And with the end of her tenth term approaching, soon she would have even less.

[QUOTE=Lunox][font=trebuchet ms] I said Raiha said having black history month is like saying it's more important than the rest of history, which allowed me to make another argument against the idea of"white history month". You're not really proving anything here. And don't belittle and mock what I said about other minority groups, or try and twist them into something negative. I do not doubt for a second that all cultures have contributed something important to history, but to say Asians or Native Americans have had as much an impact on US history and culture as blacks is ridiculous. Should we have months to celebrate Native Americans? Sure, why not? All I'm saying is the reason we DON'T is and the reason why we DO for black history month is because blacks have made a very significant impact on US history. We could dedicate a month to every minority group in the US for all I care. The fact remains that blacks are the minority group that have made the largest impacts on US history/culture. This is almost funny. Stop preaching about how we shouldn't be relying on insults when your entire response to me was a biased argument that twists my words and tries to throw me in a negative spotlight. At least I don't try and pretend about these things.[/font][/QUOTE]I honestly feel like you guys don't listen to a word I say. So I'll remind you of my opinion on this:[quote name='Aaryanna_Mom']In my opinion, if a teacher is doing their job of teaching all of it, there shouldn't be a need to make a month to focus on just one aspect of it.[/quote]This applies universally to all aspects since it is American history, not black history, not Indian history, not Asian history, not White history but... [U]AMERICAN[/U] history. Most of the fuss comes from people's inability to get past that and work for a comprehensive history. They're still busy pointing fingers over discrimination, or pointing out why one should get more... when we should be beyond this really. At this point I find it amusing that we are arguing over semantics instead of over how to revamp the system so that everything, no matter how big or small the contribution, is included.

[quote name='Retribution][font=Arial]The best part of your comment is about how teaching "was different" in the 60s. I find this hilarious, because yes, it was indeed quite different. Teaching in the 60s was [i]even more eurocentric, biased, whitewashed, and ignorant of African achievement[/i']. It stands to reason that, if most kids haven't learned about it in 2009, how the hell would they have heard about it in the bitterly violent, racialized times of the 60s? And in the midwest? I'm pretty sure she's from Utah, which would be even more homogenized than the rest of the nation. To assert she got this education in this environment is hilarious.[/font][/quote]I was born and raised in Texas, not Utah, I didn't move here until after I got married. Ironically, Utah is more forward about teaching black history than Texas so that line or reasoning is pretty pointless. Also how do you think the push came about for more comprehensive learning in the first place? From people, including history teachers, who felt like the current deal didn't cover enough. The class may have been pretty basic, but that didn't stop teachers from trying to cover more than just the mainstream white history. [QUOTE=Retribution][font=Arial]Here's the thing. I posed rhetorical questions to get at a larger point - that western education ignores other great civilizations. I'll go out on a limb and say 80 to 90% of the members here had no idea what Songhai or Mali were. But rather than acknowledge the greater point I was making about biased western education, you chose to answer these questions. And now you're claiming you learned about them in a high school world history class you took 30 to 40 years ago. I bet most people in this thread forgot the vast majority of what they learned last year, let alone decades ago. I bet most people haven't studied Africa outside of it's relation to the west via slavery. And I bet, considering all this, you looked up all this information to look smart and cute, to overlook the most important point I was making a page ago. For all your indignation about me not "paying attention," you sure as hell haven't paid attention to the point I originally made. And look, I'll be honest. It doesn't take a genius to look up Mali and Songhai on Wikipedia, read the summary paragraph at the beginning of each article, and post it here. If you care to look on those respective pages, the information you gleaned is in those paragraphs. This entire thing is hilarious. You claim to have learned (ABOUT AFRICA) something in a time where America was horrendously divided by race, where white superiority was asserted across the nation, and black achievement was massively undermined by these dynamics. Pardon me for not taking your original "knowledge" seriously.[/font][/QUOTE]I find your cynicsm rather sad actually since you're pretty much painting the picture that no one else ever cared or tried to improve the system and when I said differently, you instead you fell back on cheap shots in my direction. Just as you think no one wants to listen to you, I get the feeling that you've convinced yourself that I'm just lying to look cute. That makes having any form of a debate pointless when one side insists that the other is lying. I'm not in here to gain your belief, but if all you're going to do is keep insisting I'm wrong or deliberately lying, then there's no point in continuing.

[quote name='Lunox][font=trebuchet ms'] Both Vicky and Raiha brought up the idea that having a black history month seems like saying "black history" is more important than the rest of history. They both also brought up the idea of white history month. My arguments against white history month were a natural extension of my response. [/font][/quote]Actually that's not entirely correct, someone else brought it up before her and this was her response:[QUOTE=Raiha][COLOR="DarkOrchid"][FONT="Times New Roman"][U]Why shouldn't there be[/U]? The achievements of white people are just as important. Madame Curie, Albert Einstein, The inventor of the Model T Ford? Black history IS better than white history if we're oozing all over a special group as if they're more exciting than the rest of the old dead white guys. [U]But if we have black history month, why not have Asian History month? Indian History Month?[/U] I'd like to spend time revisiting all the glorious things Chinese civilization brought to the world. Gunpowder, Earthquake Detectors, writing, noodles.[/FONT][/COLOR][/QUOTE]All she said was why not and then suggested other stuff besides 'white history'. Then you came along and pretty much implied such a thing wasn't worth consideration since they didn't contribute as much.[quote name='Lunox][font=trebuchet ms] We don't have Asian History month in the US because the impact Asians have had on US history and culture is almost insignificant when compared to the impact black people have had. Same with Native Americans. I realize we treated them terribly and we ****** them over, but their culture and achievements did not have a huge impact on what the US is today. Just to clarify, I'm not trying to say other minority groups didn't contribute to what the US is today, just that none of them contributed nearly as much as blacks did. And to my knowledge black history month isn't really acknowledged outside of the US (correct me if I'm wrong).[/font][/QUOTE]History shouldn't be about who did the most though it's unavoidable that you will focus more on one because of that. The bottom line is teaching it as accurately as possible is what matters. But I've covered this ground already. [QUOTE=Lunox][font=trebuchet ms'] Please stop calling out others on "shoddy reading skills" when you make similar mistakes. Pulling the "I'm older than you" chain and inserting phrases like "before you were born" to assert authority ultimately undermines it. [/font][/quote]I never said I didn't make mistakes and I can and will call someone out if they're being unnecessarily rude, especially when it's because they didn't pay attention. I'm sorry you see the before you were born bit as an attempt to assert authority, when it's to illustrate that he completely missed that my points were relevant to how teaching was done when I was a teenager. I'll say it again, the notion of black history month started long before I was born and yet we still have a systematic problem of it barely being touched upon. Please try to focus on what I'm saying instead of looking for insults.

[quote name='Lunox][font=trebuchet ms]I'm still pretty sure the majority of high school students have no idea what Songhai and Mali are. I didn't know what they were, and I went to a well-respected high school. [/font][/QUOTE]I'm well aware of this. And yet I did point out that perhaps my history teacher was better since we're talking about High School kids from over thirty years ago. I haven't had a world history class since back in the late sixties early seventies. [QUOTE=Lunox][font=trebuchet ms]One might ask why there isn't a white history month- it's because in school you learn about a lot of the major achievements of white people. And let's face it, US history is mostly about white people. The US is mostly made up of white people. Having white history month in the US would be like celebrating "breathing is healthy" month. [/font][/QUOTE]The thing is, other than one tongue in cheek statement by Vicky, not one person here has even brought this up other than to preemptively [I]slam[/I] someone who may or may not suggest it. So I'm not sure what you are trying to get at with that since the suggestion here is that it's a comprehensive history, not do away with one aspect to replace it with another. [QUOTE=Retribution][font=Arial']I called her on it, and now she's indignant. [/font][/quote]Called me on what? On taking World History classes when I was in High School? On only remembering fairly obvious facts since that class was back from before you were born? On attempting to understand where Rach was coming from? On agreeing with you that the current curriculum has issues? Make no mistake Retri, the only thing I'm indignant over is your appalling lack of manners and shoddy reading skills. You're reprimanding me over[I] someone else's [/I]stance instead of my own which actually agreed with yours. If anything, that only reinforces my sentiment that education today, isn't what it was back when I was a teen.[quote name='Retribution][font=Arial]Further, she chose to overlook the relatively elementary point that [i]education in the US is heavily eurocentric and fails to teach "black history" outside of slavery and MLK.[/i'] It was a rhetorical exercise to drive home the point our education problem is not only massively biased, it's systemically problematic. We've passed the point where we can just hire new teachers - it would require an almost entire recall on teachers nationwide.[/font][/quote]Like Rach already said, pay attention to who says what. I suggested that our current national curriculum is inadequate and incidentally fails to cover all aspects of history, including Black History. I didn't suggest replacing the teachers. I think the month is a bit pointless because it's origins started before even I was born and yet people are still not being given a more in-depth education. If something hasn't made a difference in over half a century, then it's pretty obvious that it's just a flashy deal that fixes nothing.

[quote name='Retribution'][font=Arial]I guess Google really is magic.[/font][/QUOTE]That was really beneath you hun and uncalled for. Are you so sold on everyone is ignorant about history that you have to resort to insults?

[quote name='Ezekiel'][SIZE="1"]The phrase was, I believe, originally 'There is no God', but publishers wouldn't let them use it. 'Probably' was added as an afterthought to go along with advertising standards. Just pointing that out, seeing as a lot of people seem to be mentioning it.[/SIZE][/QUOTE]I find that rather sad actually. Are we so insecure in our beliefs that seeing someone declare God doesn't exist is something we can't handle? I understand the diplomatic nature of requiring it, but as a Christian, I find it sad that we seem to fine it acceptable for us to say there is and yet expect the others to tag in a disclaimer. I still find the campaign as a whole amusing, but clearly some people take it far to seriously. I know my own beliefs aren't so shallow that a simple ad would affect them. And though it's a bit unkind to say it, I can't help but laugh a little at those who did allow it to work them up to the point that they actually complained.

I often forget that it's supposed to actually mean something. Until I saw this thread, it hadn't clicked that today was Friday the 13th. I guess I'm just not superstitious enough to actually believe in something like this.

[quote name='Retribution'][font=Arial]Tell me something about Songhai you learned in school. Now tell me something you learned about ancient Rome. Tell me something about Mali you learned in school. Now tell me something you learned about ancient Greece. This is just a cursory example of what schools neglect to teach. I'm actually a bit surprised you don't readily acknowledge the academic bias that exists for pro-West history and the strange disappearance of most other histories. I bet you can label a map of western Europe correctly, but not of sub-Saharan or west Africa. It's no poor reflection on [i]you[/i], but on the systemic problem that exists in schools and America at large. It's a problem that transcends individual teachers, because this problem is nationwide. It's not a few select racist teachers or anything. It's not a few mean people. It's just everyone doesn't bother with African history for whatever reason. So to suggest we "replace them with someone else" is a suggestion that misses the enormity of the problem. Rather, we have to change the academic curricula that exist in schools across the nation. Since none of that is happening, or will happen in the foreseeable future, I support Black History Month.[/font][/QUOTE]I know you’re talking to Darren Retri, but I’m going to take you up on this. What did you want to know about Songhai other than it was one of the largest African empires in history? What did you want to know about Rome other than it is considered one of the founding cities of Western Civilization and one of the few major European cities that escaped World War II with little to no damage? What did you want to know about Mali other than it was once part of three African empires that controlled trade and that in the 1800’s it fell under French control? What did you want to know about Greece other than it fought against the Ottoman Empire to gain independence back in the 1800’s? Perhaps I just had a better history teacher than what people get today. If Darren is calling into question individual teachers, then I’m going to assume this is from the standpoint of having one who was more through, I know mine was. I have another suggestion and it’s exactly what the article was talking about. Having a month to emphasize Black History doesn’t change the fact that as a whole, history is being neglected. Yes you mention this as well, but having that month changes nothing when the entire system needs an overhaul. I’d be more inclined to support a change in the current national curriculum than to continue supporting an outdated month deal that does little to address the real problem.

I think what amuses me the most about this article, is how quickly people get offended over the concept of being responsible for their actions. I do agree that the idea of a carbon imprint is kind of besides the point and highly subjective considering the very nature of our economy. But that doesn't mean we should instantly slam it and not consider it. The actual distance is, whether anyone wants to admit it, important. For some, like Allamorph's parents it will work, but for others it can't be so easily overlooked. Being apart can be hard on anyone. Putting relationships aside, reducing pollution is always a good idea, no matter what the reason. If you're being wasteful, then by all means, consider that instead of scoffing and thinking the article has nothing of value.

[quote name='Vicky'][size=1][B]"Welcome to Glasgow. Please turn your watch back 25 years."[/B] - Frankie Boyle..[/size][/QUOTE]I could use that for here. Just switch out Glasgow and put Provo and change the years to 50. You'd have where I live down pat once you did that. o_O

[quote name='Vicky'][size=1]This is like when people used to graffiti on the North wall of our school and have arguments through the said graffiti. Except that was using cheap paint and markers, hahaa.[/size][/QUOTE]That makes both groups sound like silly little kids who need to grow up. And for some reason, I find it rather amusing. In the end, both were good for a laugh in my opinion. I'd still like to see those Atheist ads in Salt Lake City or even here in the Provo area. Can't help it. I may be Mormon, but just watching people get riled up would amuse me.

[quote name='Dooane']well to me they shouldn't drop it. and what for? people of all races today are becoming more and more aware and its about time:animesmil we have a new head chief and you know thats going to be black history. as you can tell im black woot woot lol. and i cant see America dropping this[/quote]I think a better question to ask is why have it to begin with? The whole point in looking to do away with the concept is that it's not so much black history as you put it, it's [I]American[/I] history. Trying to turn it into black history is just continuing the [I]look at me[/I] mentality that Raiha speaks of. Anyway, though I can see why they felt it was necessary, at the same time it does give the air that one aspect of history should be more important than another. I really don't agree with that when you consider how many things in history could be considered in this light. In my opinion, if a teacher is doing their job of teaching all of it, there shouldn't be a need to make a month to focus on just one aspect of it.

[quote name='ChibiHorsewoman][COLOR="#9933ff"']So over the weekend this new cop (twenty-three years old) on the RPD was shot in the back of the head after he responded to a drug complaint in the city. Today the person who did it turned himself in and get this, he's fourteen years old.[/color][/quote]You need a better example than that. The death penalty can no longer be applied to anyone under 18 years of age. [URL="http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=4518051"][U]Court Ruling[/U][/URL] And I agree with that decision even though I support the Death Penalty.

Davos Frost, as Shy already said, will not be there. She would have no reason to attend. If she were performing the ceremony, the couple would be expected to hold the wedding at the citadel. I agreed to play as Davos Frost since she does not require as much posting as other characters would. I'll still drop stuff in from time to time though and I'm certainly keeping up with what's been posted so far.

Both of them had stories that fit the six story guideline quite well, making a choice rather difficult in my mind. So with that in mind and looking at this:[quote name='Sabrina][FONT="Tahoma"']A tiny smile, they were thrilled.[/FONT][/quote]I give my vote to [B]Sabrina[/B] for having the one I enjoyed the most out of all of them.

[B]chibi-maste[/B]r, you have an excellent concept and though it lacks in execution, the emotions to it are still quite powerful and downright shocking. Putting the grammar issues aside, I think you got the childlike nature of how such a world would be seen from the little girl's eyes down rather well. [B]Anomaly[/B], your story was equally as sad in a different manner. Two people in a failed relationship that in many ways was going no where. You executed it rather well and brought both characters to life, even the ending left you wondering what would happen next. Both stories were quite sad and though I think Anomaly executed it better, I also felt more emotion from chibi-master's story. Making the choice a little harder in my mind. For being a bit more startling and therefore standing out more in my mind, I vote for [B]chibi-master[/B].