Writing When you miss her this much,

[Phantom]

[b]When you miss her this much,[/b]

[size=1]When you miss her this much,
When you long just to feel her touch,
Life breaks through,
Reality of the true,
When it gets to be too much,

While your mind is hideously reluctant to fold,
When your heart cannot, and will not be told,
Life just breaks through,
Veracity of the true,
When it?s her alone that you need to hold,

When it?s her that you need just like this,
Heaven seems so close, just like bliss,
That?s when life ruptures through,
There?s not much you can do,
Not now when you miss her like this?[/size]

Sorry, this is more of a song than a poem?you? would have to hear the symphony of tears that were coursing my eyelids as I wrote this, and hear the melody of sheer longing cry that was being scourged from my soul to make this actually sound sweet..

[Guest boogeta]

Your prety good at wrighting poems

[Phantom]

I dont write them... its liek something possesses me when i write...specialy when its to do with my girl... lol..

[kakkarot ssj4]

That poem expresses exactly what i'm feeling...

exactly theres not much you can do when she left you behind and moved on...my life sux...

i wish i could write poems like you..i cant write worth anything..but i can draw a paint really well.

[Phantom]

Well a picture is woth a thousand words my friend.

However my angel comes back to me every night....heh...its just that essential longing period I feel for the breathless moments that she is not with me.

[playababygurl79]

i liked it, i kinda thought it mighta been a song as i was reading. ur really good at writing, i know the feelin of missing someone that much, so i think i understood a lot more of what you were talking about..hope you keep writing.