Writing Sakura: A Haiku

[Yu Yu Hakusho!]

This is my first one....tell me what you think. And maybe it's not a real Haiku....but it proably doesn't make much sense....^_^;

Through my window I can see
The Cherry Blossom Tree
In the moonlight it shines
Blending with the Earth
The pink is much more than a color
It is the feeling you get when you see it
Through your window
In the moonlight

ACK!! I hope you guys think it isn't as stupid as I think it sounds.....0_o

[Sui Generis]

Hey good job! I actually enjoyed it! Good work! Keep at it!

[KittyLynn]

Same I think its very interesting and cute.^_^ Sakura trees are very pretty.

[Yu Yu Hakusho!]

Thank you. Someone actually does read this stuff.....0_o

[Guest Musahi]

[size=1]It's fairly decent. Nice for your first try. [b]But[/b] haikus are only 3 lines long.[/size]

[Yu Yu Hakusho!]

I know....but most Haiku's aren't supposed to make much sense and mine didn't. We were learining about them the other day in Language Arts and they said that they don't HAVE to be 3 liners. Some famous ones were longer than that.