Writing Untitled *~First Poem on Otaku Boards~*

[Heartless Me]

Her eyes were green
I couldn't say no
we danced and danced
all over the floor

when she asked if I wanted more
If I wanted, I could not reject her
As we walked towards the door
I recalled the even as a meer blurr

we walked down the street
under a full moon
out of the town we were to meet
at the shore of a small lagoon.

there in the sand
she took my hand
our gazes were crossed
and in her pupils i was lost

She had leaned in and pursed her lips
as I put my hands upon her hips
we kissed for a time i could not tell
it was beyond everything in heaven and hell

my knees got week
my passion grew
her wicked streak
i wish i knew

adrift in mind
i tilt my head
wishing now
I knew she were dead

upon my neck the fangs did pierce
and my fear arises somethign fierce
her arms then wrap around me tight
as I silently scream in fright

I try to flee I try to run
but my body is still to my ire
I know now that i'll never again see the sun
because I fell for a evil vampire.

[The Harlequin]

[font=gothic][color=crimson]Vampyres and sex. Doesn't get any better than that. Production quality lacks a little, and certain phrases could be tweaked here and there, but overall it's not that bad.[/font][/color]

[vegeta rocker]

Yay vampyres!!!!!
mmmmmm basically what HAR. said. Just a little tweaking on the rhyming and you're set.