Writing Sorry

[wiccansamurai]

I died befor eoyu noticed
my life was already gone
There's nothing you can do
You can't come along

Sure i know you love
yeah i think you cared
I'm sorry to leave you
Please honor these moments we've shared

[KittyLynn]

[COLOR=deeppink]Its very good. I like it a lot. You seem to have a talent for it. I'm sure you can get a lot better with some practice! ^^[/COLOR]

[wiccansamurai]

thankies ^.^