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[color=indigo][font=times new roman][b]Okay, I decided I will start my own thread of poetry. I have never wrote this much in my life, and so far I have been getting good compliments. So here it goes, feel free to post your comments and thoughts.

If you have something to [i]complain[/i] or have an argument, pm me. I will not appreciate rude comments towards my poems or anyone else's thoughts and opinions.


[center][color=teal][font=times new roman][b][i]~The hardest thing~[/b]

Happiness is the key,
Love is the lock,
Together they equal
The hardest thing,

Pain is my friend,
Depression is my lover,
Together they equal
The hardest thing,

Time is luxury,
Costs are important,
Together they equal
The hardest thing,

You are my happiness,
You are my love,
You are my pain,
And you are the cost
Of my time,

You have left me to live
In the warm arms of Depression,
You are the hardest thing...

[b]~Dedicated to Brad[/color][/font][/b][/i][/center]
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[color=royal blue]I liked that a lot. I seem to be attracted toward poems with a depressing mood more than anything else. I liked the repitition of "the hardest thing" during the poem. It reminded me of someone who's been affecting me that way for quite some time now...someone I used to love.

Anyway, this is a very good poem.[/color]
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[color=teal][font=times new roman][b][size=1]Well thank you. That is why I wrote this one, I too love this person. He meant everything to me.

Thank you once again


It's wrong to hate,
But Hate is the world,

Justice is proven with Hate,
Hate of others,

Friends betray another,
Hate is responsible
for the pain Hate brings,

Love is beautiful,
Love is right,

For me,
Love has become Hate,

Hate is me,
I am Hate..[/color][/font][/i][/size][/center]

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