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[size=1][color=darkblue]I wrote this poem last night when I was thinking about the love I had for someone. It's kind of about how we met and then how I started to feel about him. I don't have a name for it, but here it is!

At first I barely knew you,
Just a familliar face among the very few.
You came along for a quick ride,
But you then continued to stay by my side.
For awhile I wondered why you were there,
Just giving me that happy stare.
For not many people enjoyed me around,
Because I would just stay silent and stare at the ground.
But you were always there to make me happy,
To lift my spirits when I felt crappy.
You made me laugh, smile, and enjoy the time that went by,
You even made me scream to the sky.
Then soon I felt different about you,
You made my feeling complete and true.
My heart goes faster, I blush and feel strange,
I now feel myself begin to change.
I now know what I didn't before,
I love you, and I shall forever more.

So what do you think? I will probably write more soon. Reading this one makes me sad, since, well...... he doesn't like me back and I'm trying to get over it.
I'll try and write more later.[/color][/size]
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[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Inuluvr1 [/i]
[B][size=1][color=chocolate]Beautiful poem Conna. I like it a lot; and plus it rhymed, and you did great with the rhyming too. What I didn't get was that you were, "screaming to the sky."
Wow.[/size][/color] [/B][/QUOTE]

You stole my post!

That was an [i]amazing[/i] poem. I loved it. You should call it... "Stranger to the Heart". :p I know, bad name. You did a great job with rhyming though.
[QUOTE][i]Originally posted by Inuluvr1 [/i]
[B][size=1][color=chocolate]What I didn't get was that you were, "screaming to the sky."
Wow.[/size][/color] [/B][/QUOTE]

She just needed something to rhyme with time went by, probably. :p That's my guess.

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[size=1][color=darkblue]Thanks guys! Actually, the "Screaming to the sky" part was for when he made me mad... or when I actually did scream because everything was so complicated with him. Ahh, love is a strange, complicated thing, hn?
But thanks for the comments! I have found a new way to express my feelings, thank god for poems! I'll try to write more.[/color][/size]
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