Writing Rurouni Kenshin KILLER BEES! fanfic.

[Link Himura]

This is part one in a goofy little RK comedy about poor Kenshin and a killer bee atack.

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Rurouni Kenshin, Killer Bees!
?KENSHIN! Where are you going?? Kaoru yelled as Kenshin left the dojo.

?Here we go again? Kenshin muttered.

Yahiko suddenly appeared, ?Going? Where is Kenshin going??

?He?s going somewhere without my knowledge?? Sanosuke suddenly popped in.

?For once, Id like to go to some place in PEACE!!!? Kenshin yelled.

Kauru?s eyes filled with tears. ?You don?t?. like me anymore??

Sanosuke got all angry. ?Oh great Kenshin you made her cry!?

?Ha! Its about time that ugly raccoon was dumped? Yahiko laughed. Kaoru burst out in more tears. Kenshin started walking away slowly.

?Yahiko you little BRAT!? Sano yelled.

?At least I?m not a rooster head!? Yahiko and Sano broke out in a fight as Kaoru broke out in tears. Kenshin suddenly bumped into a tree and a beehive fell out on his head.

?Oro?? Suddenly the hive began to shake.

Yahiko screamed. ?OH SHI?.TAKI MUSHROOMS!? The others stared at him. ?What its American TV.? But just then the hive broke.
TO BE CONTINUED!

[Guest sixthcrusifix]

HEHE, Funny, And sadly short..... YOU MUST WRITE MORE! I am inpatiant fanfic fan!lol, By the way I sent you two messages, And, if you want to continue this, REMEMBER, edit your post, Don't make a consecutive one, I got in big trouble for that.

[wiccansamurai]

Er, sixxy, as long as its not double posting, its fine.

This was pretty good. It was really funny. Although, better grammar would have helped a bit in understandng it.

[Link Himura]

The hive was open. The whole K-gang stared wide eyed as hundreds of bees emerged from it. They fluttered for a bit then charged at the group.

"KAMAKAZI BOMBERS!" Yahiko screamed. A nereby policeman heard the sound.

"Kamakazi bombers eh? sounds like a nice war technique.... Ill go tell the boss..."

Everyone scattered. They began running through the town. The hundreds of bees stung everyone in site. Of course back then EVERYONE was alergic to bees. People fell unconciouse right and left. Megumi was going to work. Kaoru and Yahiko jumped into the Akebeko. Kenshin was where he fought Sano. Sano was with his friend.

"This means war" Kenshin muttered. He used mud to make black lines on his face.

Meanwhile SAno chucked a bomb out the window, blowing up a nereby house instead of the bees. The bugs swarmed the house.

"Kenshin, its all up to you now." He said. He threw a bomb down blowing the whole place to pieces...

[Guest MetalSonic700]

The first one was a bit funnier but their both great! but the chapters are far to short.

[wiccansamurai]

I actually prefer smaller chapters. Allows me to read them quickly.

Anyway, i think it was really funny, and am happy you write properly, not like someone in the fifth grade.

[Link Himura]

The bees swarmed into the akebeko. Everyone ook cover. One of the bees found Tae and whats-her-name and stung them. Yahiko stared in horror. He busted out from his hiding space.

"No one kills my girlfriend and gets away with it!'

"Um, Yahiko, Im still fine."

"WHY THE HELL ARE YOU ALIVE?"

"Im not alergic to bees."

Then, hundreds of bees swarmed her and stung her to death.

"No one kills my girlfriend and gets away with it!"

He charged at the bees andswung his bokken but only killed like 8 and was engulphed by the rest. Kauru stood up. Her eyes turned dark amber. Her hair got red.

"THAT WAS MY LAST STUDENT! YOU WILL ALL PAY WITH YOUR LIVES!" She gripped the bokken in her hand and pretended to sheath it. "AMEKEKERO RYU NO HIRAMEKI!" She used godlike speed to cut through dozens of bees at once. Only one was left.

"READY TO DIE?"

The bee spoke "Kenshin hates you."

She broke out in tears and the bee flew ouveer and stung her. 3 DOWN!

[Guest MetalSonic700]

That..... was funny as crap! The whole "Kenshin hates you thing" made me bust out laughing. Thats good stuff! Keep going!