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Ah well, I just had several inspirations to write the past couple days and dicided to post what I've written read and enjoy! (Oh, and make suggestions too.)

[COLOR=YellowGreen]Dew

A power strong,
And very true.

A song of earth,
And morning dew.

An angel?s tears soft and sweet,
Spread above the pixies meet.

Pixies take the angel?s tears,
Tears of happiness and of fears.

Holding onto the droplets pure,
A heavy burden many bore.

Dropping the water on the ground,
Above little faeries safe and sound.

The pitter-patter many feel,
Wakes them up and breaks the seal.

Now those tiny ones may still be in bed,
Hiding from what lies ahead.

Giving up and forgetting the moon,
Praying for a beautiful noon.

The faerie?s song wakes the sun,
Telling them the job is done.[/COLOR]
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I really like this one... :)
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[COLOR=DarkOrange]A firefly cannot compare,
To a pixie?s angelic flare.

Their soft eyes and gentle stare,
Pale skin and shiny hair.

A pixie?s wings small and pretty,
And a smile that is very giddy.

Malicious thoughts float in their mind,
Troublesome, tricky, and un-kind.

But you always forgive them, yes you must,
For their beauty is what will make you trust.

But don?t be fooled, be wary, be smart,
Their beauty is not their only art.[/COLOR]

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And, I think this one is OK.
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[COLOR=DarkOrchid]A petal from a rose makes dreams come true,
While a petal for a purple tulip means I hate you.

Flowers have meanings,
Although not clear.

But I have one,
One that is great,
Powerful, strong and one to hate.

Only I can surpass the sea,
I may only be,
An angel without wings,
One who is none,
And one who can?t sing,
But I?ll never been done,
Never, ever, until I?

Find my wings.[/COLOR]

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I think this one is one of the best I've written in years.
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[COLOR=deeppink]Just a word,
A simple sound,
Something that tells who I am,
And what I may be.

A syllable or two,
That?s all I need,
Easy, perfect and definitely me.

A word that will understand,
A word that?s keen,
Something malevolency,
Yet totally serene.

A word that is me?
Perfect, heartless,
Childish, me?

What a word I search for,
One never to be found,
Only looked for,
One to create,
And one to be.

I am no angel,
No human,
No beast,
A nymph?
A pixie?
A faerie?
A sprite?
A me?

A me, that is I,
One with beauty,
And evil spite,
A malicious aim,
And a dark grin.

A me,
That is who is I,
Someone individual,
A me with no other,
A soul who will never exist again,
One who never existed before,
Me.[/COLOR]

I hope you like. I liked writing them.
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I liked the first and second ones, they seemed really well done. The third one was okay, but I didn't like it that much. Oddly, I didn't like the last one so much, but it was still good. You're quite talented at this, I must say. Nice work.
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[quote name='Squall']I liked the first and second ones, they seemed really well done. The third one was okay, but I didn't like it that much. Oddly, I didn't like the last one so much, but it was still good. You're quite talented at this, I must say. Nice work.[/quote]

Really? *sparkly eyes* Thanks, This is what I do since I have arthritis, yes, I'm very young, but I have broken my wrists and hands so many time, (plus I was born with it, well a little anyway) I can't draw very well, I can't hold a pecil correctly. So I type, and make poems or write stories, plus I'm always sick so I'm always home and alway's on my computer. So, thanks. Most people tel me I'm really good at things I'm not, but I don't think I've every talked (typed) in any discusion realted to you. So your opinion was un-biased. Yay, I'm better then I thought. :) *Happy*

EDIT: New Poem

Perfection

Only skin deep,
Beauty.

Only years gone by,
Age.

Only thoughts inside,
Intellegence.

Only a friend,
Lier.

Only a life,
Death.

Only a side,
Evil.

Only a shade,
Black.

Only a color,
Red.

Only one,
Me.

Only one,
You.

Only a dream,
Perfection.
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