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White Akita Posted April 1, 2004 Share Posted April 1, 2004 [I]I really like your poem. you are a really talented artist. Is this perhaps from experience? From pain you have suffered, or is it describing another? Anyway, I really like it. It has a nice, how do ! say, "texture" so to speak. It has much thought into it and thats what makes it great, and I like the word choices. I'm not really a fan of "big words" all the time. Too many "big words" make the poem dull. You keep it alive. I really believe you can go far if you keep writing like this, but i'm not one whose good to critique.[/I] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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