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[color=teal][center][font=Microsoft Sans Serif]Moonlit waters, sunbaked sands
Tempting springs, rolling lands
Cold Volcano, hot summer nights
New Year's bells, autumn sights.

Cherry blossoms, snow-capped hills
Fishing fleet, rice wine mills
City lights, country sounds
Honor upheld, romance found.

Rising sun, glowing moon
Relaxing evening, hectic noon
Dancing fans, silken dresses
Lovely gaze, raven tresses.

Martial arts, way of peace
Winter's cold, spring's release
Cloudless nights, cyan sky
Open air, time flows by.[/font][/center]

I'm back, even if it will be on and off all summer. Sorry I kept you waiting, OB.[/color]
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[FONT=Times New Roman][FONT=Tahoma][COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]You told me that you loved me
Although you never knew what love meant
You appreciated all the laughing
And cherished the time we spent[/COLOR]
[COLOR=Blue]
You left me crying, crying, crying
Until I'm half-asleep
You told me that you'd protect me
But tonight I feel so weak[/COLOR]

[COLOR=MediumTurquoise]When you are within in my eyesight
Something tugs at my heart so tight
My heart is pleading for you to answer its call
Even though you aren't in these halls[/COLOR]

[COLOR=RoyalBlue]
This isn't love, this isn't right
I'm thinking of you day and night
This shit has to stop before I lose my mind
No matter how much I want you
Here in my life[/COLOR][/FONT][COLOR=DeepSkyBlue][/FONT]

[FONT=Comic Sans MS]I had to write a piece of my poetry when I saw yours Talon. ;) Sorry, but I got so excited when I saw SOMEONE post poetry. I like your poem too, it has a lot of imagery.[/COLOR][/FONT]
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[size=2][font=arial narrow]Welcome back, Talon. Unfortunately, I suggest you read the OB Anthology Basics [the one that says 'Read Before Posting. ^.~] as it outlines a policy brought in last year. All creative threads must be rated for maturity, and any thread that is not rated must be closed.

To learn more about the ratings, check the [url=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44313][b]OB Anthology Basics[/b][/url].

Benakittie, feel free to create your own poetry thread. I know there are lots of poetry threads around here. [url=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=47460]Unknown Deceit[/url], [url=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=47501]Various Poetry[/url], [url=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=47514]Poems from the Past Year[/url], [url=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=47531]Lilith[/url], and [url=http://otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=47459]Ducky[/url] are all poems from the bottom half of the first page XP. It isn't too hard to find poems, and I do encourage you to create your own thread so that others can comment on it. ^_^

Talon, feel free to re-create the thread with the appropriate rating.[/font][/size]
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