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IS IT A GOOD STORY SO FAR  

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  1. 1. IS IT A GOOD STORY SO FAR

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    • maybe
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    • Needs ALOT MORE WORK
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Long ago a swordsman, archerymaster, and Staffsman. They had a gift they were born with. The swordsman could bond with the Phoniex. The archerymaster could bond with nature. The staffsman could bond with water. Well a evil force unknown we after there wonderful gift. They used there power but failed they were running to Kyproian Village. They met Sykia she taught them about there gifts and there origns. Finally they made a choice to put thier powers into a vessel. They decided to put them into each of there weapons. They Swordsman created the Phoniex Sword. They Archerymaster created Natures Arrow. The Staffsman created the Tsunami Staff. Each of these weapons were very powerful. Suddenly the evil force crept in the village and demanded the Warriors to come out. They each picked an element. The Staffsman hid his weapon in the Volcanoe of Cold Fire. The Archerymaster hid his weapon in an river. Then the Swordsman kept his weapon and ran off to hid it somewhere suddenly an Hurricane hit the town. He climbed on a tree and put it in a tree. It blew off and the evil force howled in anger. Then Skyia took a flaming arrow and hit the evil creature. Then they each decided to split up and never see each other again. But little did they know power sleeps inside them and they must meet to awaken it.
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[COLOR=DarkOrange]Welcome to the Arena, [B]PyroGC4343[/B]. I'm afraid this thread is being locked for three reasons:

1. [B]Rating.[/B] As stated in the [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/showthread.php?t=44318]sticky[/URL], all RPGs must have ratings. This is merely as a precaution to ensure that nobody winds up reading something that they have no desire to.

2. [b]Grammar[/b]. You want to take a look at your grammer; the better the grammar is, the easier it is to read the story and then the more people will want to join. Again, all of this information is found in the sticky.

3. [b]Recruitment[/b]. This is not the place to have stories critiqued and worked through. This is where you recruit people to [i]play[/i] your stories. If you want help with the story idea, you would go to the [URL=http://www.otakuboards.com/forumdisplay.php?f=88]Underground[/URL].

Read the sticky, know the sticky, the sticky is your friend, as it makes both our lives easier. Feel free to repost this, correcting what needs be, and also feel free to recruit other players. But for now,

[b]Thread locked.[/b][/COLOR]
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