Writing "autumn is here at last" [E]

[Lady Asphyxia]

[QUOTE=Nomura]Uh oh...crazy blonde moment.

hinting death, yet living as winter's scorn

I know...it's not gonna work.. hauling...hauling winter's scorn...no...pulling...no...

how 'bout

hinting death, defining winter's scorn

I'm just saying a couple of words that might not work(probably won't), but try them.[/QUOTE] [font=Arial][size=2]
Nomura, while your suggestions were valid, in future [i]please[/i] try to make your posts more coherant. You have to remember that when we read your posts, we can't read your mind. Just clarify what you're saying in future, okay? ^.~


As for [[i]word[/i]] winter's scorn, I'm quite partial to [i]dealing[/i] winter's scorn.
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[Mitch]

autumn is here at last
leaves yellow, falling fast
the trees are naked - gloomy, vast
an eerie peace, a stark contrast

fall is when i'll be torn
dead yet alive, withered, worn
hinting death, portending winter's scorn
when i fall, none will mourn

for the leaves must die again
must fall freely, changed and grim
only for life to later begin
hanging, i will ask then

when will fall come and take me
the last leaf on a tree
waiting on a bough to see
end of days as i onward dream