Art New Stuff (Feedback pls)

[Sentou Ryoku]

Finally finished my latest piece. This one's inspired by the new Naruto ending (the one with the dogs) and episode 168. Also, this marks my first time in attempting to add a background to my work...Needless to say, I still need a lot of work. Oh well, here it is:

[url]http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29358906/[/url]

Done in pencil, inked with Sakura Micron pens, cleaned up in Adobe PhotoHome Deluxe.

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[KatanaViolet]

it's very cute, hehe, I quite enjoy it.
Although I think it could really use some color and shading to give it more emphasis..
But that's better than anything I could ever do! Well done.

[Aaryanna]

[COLOR=DarkSlateBlue]That's really quite good. I like how all the details are nice and clean. It's a great line art picture. Have you considered making some of the lines thicker than others to gvie it a little more depth? It would certainly help it pop a little more. ^_^ Over all I would give it a 9/10. Great job.[/COLOR]